We think that is was good being in black and white, we felt that it fitted the genre well.
It didn't flow well with all the jump cuts between shots. The shots were well used but need some transitions for it to blend better.
The narrative was hard to understand with all the jumping between shots. The locations were good but it was weird that it went from inside to outside then back.
There was a lot of background noise during the forest section with the people filming laughing. A music track would be useful to cover the noise.
Titles would need to be added to make it look more serious.
The mise-en scene didn't fit as the main character wore a different top from the start and the finish.
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