Feedback from S1-22 on final cut

We think that S1-21 have made a lot of improvements compared to their rough cut. The soundtrack we thought made the opening more successful and conventional to a thriller. The credits fitted in really well with the editing of your work making it interesting to look at. The low angle shot of Adam worked really well to show that he is the antagonist. Overall, we think that the final version fits the conventions of a thriller opening :)