Monday 22 February 2010

Feedback form S1-24

Overall, a good blog; we would like to point out that the narrative is a bit jumpy. It doesn't seem to keep track; the part where, the female is running in the field jumps from the prior shot which has nothing to do with it.

Good ideas for the thriller though, we can tell that it meets the criteria for the genre.

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