Evaluation of Feedback

The difficulties and faults in our ten second breakdown which the other groups have commented on i agree with. This is including that while reading through our blog is can become confusing. Although out intentions are good and we explored all conventions well, we were not consistent, so our opening sequence did not flow properly. Weather conditions may also be a diffictuly filming, capturing out footage in limited time. However the groups explained how we 'employed good techniques'. In order to improve our breakdown we need to be more clear on our plan. Although our idea was good and different to others, having a infulence from another film to aspire to in our film would give the audience a better visual image of our opening sequence. In addition adding screen grabs of images or parts of films to our blog, of characters will also help boost a grade.